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Re: Romanov
Hey, honey. I swear your poems are like candy; I gobble them up. I totally did this critique a while back, but when I tried to post it my scanner ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: picture of an old cowboy dying in the city
Hey, honey. This again, like Romanov was a poem that I critiqued quite a bit of time ago. But my scanner was being evil McEvil face about stuff, so I ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Under a Bright Blue Sky
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. Feel free to PM or poke me if you have any questions or cannot read my handwriting. 1. Stanzas I believe you poem would ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Rentre à la Maison: Come Home
Hey, honey. So sorry it took me this long to post a critique. Life happened. Rather forcefully I might add. So here we go. If you have any questions about ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you don't understand my handwriting/scrawl or anything else needs to be clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. 1. The ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: "Sepia" Rewrite
Hey, hon. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or need anything clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. Tada. I really like this ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Cursed
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or want clarification on anything, don't hesitate to poke or PM me. 1. Do the Punct! I believe ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: "Insomnia", a small character analysis
Hello, dear. So here is my spiel. If you can't read my handwriting or if you want something clarified, please feel free to PM or poke me. :D Now onto ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Horatio
Horatio in all my dreamt up philosophies I was a seafarer, Horatio. sailing between heaven and earth the gold on my jacket, the romance in my heart, but you tore ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: [The Most Epic] Desert Island Discs Project
YAY! I'm so glad you guys like it. Dem > You don't know the half of what happened. I had to swear fealty to a Norse God for a copy ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: [The Most Epic] Desert Island Discs Project
So, if you are a moderator, JMod or were an instructor on YWS, you possibly remember the Desert Island Discs Project I was working on. Well, I psuedo-finished it. Psuedo-finished ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: The YWLJ 2010 Volume: On Sale Now!
Oh YAY! This is really exciting. :P
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Ello
Hello, Phantom. Welcome to YWS. :elephant: We've got dancing pink elephants. Isn't this awesome? ;) If you have any questions, feel free to give me a shout out or PM ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Badges!
Oooh, nice.
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Cal's Fanmix & Proper Critique Central [Edited 10/23/10]
Proper Critiques Posted 03/06/10 Writersdomain: Shrive: Prologue // Shrive: Chapter 1 NaRachel: Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity" Dreamworx95: Of Jinn and Devil LavenderBlue: Ali
Mar 7, 2010
